Thursday, April 14, 2011

Student Example

I found that Chantelle's student example of the lay of the land paper was very good and enjoyable to read. When going on her portfolio website, the document was in a font very difficult to read, which was a big downfall of her website. But the paper itself was very good. Chantelle's site of the daycare is a great one and would be really fun and exciting to go to and observe. She really made her experience going there come to life and you can really picture what is going on throughout her day there. You can picture the kids and you can feel the energy they give off. She overall does a really strong job at painting the image of what the environment is like at this daycare, as she describes what is around her. It makes me think of when i was in pre-school and the energy that was present while at such a young age really shines through in this essay. You get a sense of Miss Ouellette as the teacher and how she creates this friendly and fun learning environment for the kids. Some of the kids she talks about and even the teacher I can picture in my head and I smile because they are really friendly. It makes me think about how important pre-school, kindergarten, and daycare even are to kids and their childhoods. At that age you learn to interact and be social, as well as have fun. Choosing this for her site was a really great choice for Chantelle and I'm sure it is something she enjoys working on and going to observe. Her final paper will probably be very enjoyable to read. I also thought it was a wise idea that she included some pictures of the daycare at the top - the white building she described where she "couldn't be at the right place" and the inside itself. Overall it is really good work!


Her website: http://chantellesportfolio.weebly.com/

1 comment:

  1. Derek,
    I think that the way you describe the daycare makes it so fun. I agreed with what you said about how Chantelle gives a very clear and vivid picture about the daycare and how it definitly does make you think back to when you were that age when life was just so careless. Also I like how you talk about how she brings up the teacher and the other details because that truly is a very important part of the essay!

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